Task
Using the information in the case notes, write a letter of referral to Mr John Fraser, Orthopaedic Surgeon, requesting assessment for further management.
Case notes
- Mrs Grace Adeyemi, 66, left knee osteoarthritis confirmed on X-ray (severe medial joint space narrowing).
- 12 weeks of supervised exercise and weight-management advice; attended 11 of 12 sessions; lost 4 kg.
- Pain at rest and at night now 7/10 (was 5/10 at start). Walking tolerance reduced from 30 to 10 minutes.
- Knee flexion 0–95°; fixed flexion deformity 5°; quadriceps strength improved.
- Analgesia: regular paracetamol and topical NSAID, minimal benefit.
- Lives with husband; stopped her volunteer work at a library because of pain. Has a grandchild’s wedding in 3 months.
Try it yourself first: five minutes to plan, 40 minutes to write, 180–200 words in the body of the letter.
Model answer
Body word count: 184 (target 180–200, excluding the address, date, salutation and sign-off).
Why this letter works
Purpose
Makes clear that conservative treatment has been tried in full — the key point for a surgeon deciding on next steps.
Content
Pain trend, night pain, reduced walking tolerance and range of movement give the surgeon objective evidence of failed conservative care.
Conciseness & Clarity
Session-by-session attendance and the family event are left out; “completed a supervised exercise programme” covers it.
Genre & Style
Surgeons in the UK and Australia are addressed as “Mr/Ms” — a small detail that shows awareness of the reader.
Language
Contrast is handled with accurate linking (“Although… has improved, her pain has increased”).
What was left out — and why
- Attendance figures beyond noting the course was completed.
- The family event, which doesn’t affect surgical decision-making.
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